Good intro, love the uplifting breakdown, but I seem to miss a big climax after the breakdown (I mean, it's just like the beat is re-introduced after the breakdown).
Don't get me wrong, I'm not critisising you (I couldn't do it any better), just want to give my honest opinion.
I think it's a very nice second attempt, but you have little work on it.
no need to be preemptively defensive BD! =) I rather appreciate the feedback! You're not the first one to say my build-up needs work! maybe snare roll or something, and a more rapid build-up? dunno. i'll get it right one of these times =P
Edit - yes I used FL Studio. Learning it a little more with each track I do! I have trouble getting the mix-down to sound good, but this is the best I've done I think by a long shot
Well I have to say this is very good indeed. A lovely production. Nothing over the top. But a nice melody and good percussion in all the right places made it a good listen. Really just a lovely tune. Well made without any noticable flaws. If I were you I would leave it as it is. And just goes to show what can be done in Fruity Loops. Well done indeed
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thank you guys! very encouraging, and I am glad that somebody is actually listening! sunny, really appreciate your thoughts! and thank you also, perleth! will keep producing, you all just keep listening!
You're not the first one to say my build-up needs work! maybe snare roll or something, and a more rapid build-up?
dunno. i'll get it right one of these times =P 
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