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another trance poem
Old 16-05-2008, 03:58 PM   #1
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another trance poem

never skip a beat
after hours
never skip a beat

trance until you follow
step away while you leave

never skip a beat

drive into the night
quite lost but unafraid

awake until tomorrow

chooning away
too deep

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-2008.05.16-

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Old 17-05-2008, 06:59 PM   #2
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Very nice! Glad to see more poems in Content Creation!
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Old 26-11-2009, 09:30 PM   #3
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Hard music feet moving losing interest need a trip.

Feels dull take another moving faster blank spaces.

Empty sight black light lose control fall away.

Notice nothing painful world keep me safe from all the hurt.

Bleeding soul fleeting mind confused senses friends unkind light breeze carry me away take me to a place save me from this state.

In a trance slowing dance slight trip losing grip.

Smoke haze in a daze eyes lulling stay awake.

Pull away stay strong just a pill can’t go wrong.
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Old 26-11-2009, 11:32 PM   #4
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Seek a thrill
Take your senses on a ride
Body in motion
Let the music take over your mind

Release your fear
Focus on the sound
Feel it lift you up
And slowly bring you down

See how it takes control
While you try to keep the beat
The music wants to have you
Dancing til you’re weak.

Til you can’t take a step
Til you can’t take a breath
Til you collapse into a heap
Dance until your death.
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Old 27-11-2009, 12:29 AM   #5
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Just a line

First time don’t fear
You’re safe I’m here

Paranoia setting in
Calmed mind you begin

White night pure as snow
Pressure driven takes it slow

Past tense it’s fine
Been tested just a line

Lost mind wasted life
Seek truth feels like

My mistake twisted fate
Stop now too late

You’re gone still here
Move on don’t fear

Just a line
Late friend of mine.
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Old 23-06-2010, 06:27 PM   #6
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Meddling molecules, travelling with tenacity through slippery synapses. The urge, the pressure, the unrelenting mission to evolve through time and space. Appeased by soft fluffy breezes, tingling the touch sense on your delicate surface skin, tittilating its way through tendrils in turmoil. Awake at last, consciousness creeping up on its opposite, fumbling erronously but resilient, particles of light shine crisply, transcending your parched eyelids. Eyelash a-flutter, star energy connects to your iris, swelling it with morphogenetic strain.

Your heart bristles, left perplexed in sodomatic ecstacy from eargasmic signals. Sand slips silently through limp fingers, as legs raise the body, onward, outward, toward a new horizon.... once more.
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Old 28-06-2010, 06:20 AM   #7
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nice poems, good job!!
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